Veola's Shop

How's My Driving?

This is a crit post, where I beg for criticism so I can improve my performance. If you like this characterization, you'll like her to be better characterized, right? If you hate how I play her, you'll want to get rid of all the badness, right? I could do better! Please? And thanks, whether for providing very welcome crit or for reading through this rant and not punching me in the face or anything.

It's screened, anon enabled, and all the stuff for other to not see your comments and to deprive me of a way to track you to show my utmost thanks. For proof(and my testing purposes), you cannot see the obviously selfcest comment(it's labeled obviously selfcest) I made to myself.

To anyone that has gone to the castle's ruins, has anything been found? Clues on what Somarium is or how the castle was able to float, for example.

[Some buttons are pressed as Veola tries to figure out what this device in her pouch was. Somehow, she activated the video. She first looks at the screen strangely, wondering what it was doing. The slight constant shaking of the screen shows the nervousness she's been trying to keep to her self.]

"......"

[She soon figured it was pointless. It's not like she would talk to herself in the middle of nowhere, that would be silly. Her look soon turned to one of worry as she gave one last look at the device and looked around. The camera angle shifted along when she put the strange thing back in her pouch. From then on, the video just shows shifting movements in her pouch until it naturally timed out.]

Hello.

Welcome. Pay no mind to the ones outside.

Oh, hello.

I'm a little busy. Could you make it quick?