atelierveola: (smiling)

How's My Driving?

This is a crit post, where I beg for criticism so I can improve my performance. If you like this characterization, you'll like her to be better characterized, right? If you hate how I play her, you'll want to get rid of all the badness, right? I could do better! Please? And thanks, whether for providing very welcome crit or for reading through this rant and not punching me in the face or anything.

It's screened, anon enabled, and all the stuff for other to not see your comments and to deprive me of a way to track you to show my utmost thanks. For proof(and my testing purposes), you cannot see the obviously selfcest comment(it's labeled obviously selfcest) I made to myself.


Jul. 4th, 2030 10:42 pm
atelierveola: (You'll be seeing this one a lot)
I'm a little busy right now. I'll get back to you later.

[just point out if it's ic or ooc!]
atelierveola: (Default)
[Character Name] Veola
[Canon] Atelier Iris: Eternal Mana
[Point Taken from Canon] Endgame, after all her events

[Age] 16
[Gender] Female
[Sexual Orientation] Hetero

[Eye Color] violet
[Hair Color] brown
[Height] 5'1"
[Other] Nothing really. Most distinguishing feature is the hat
She has a turtleneck dress, a simple shawl over it and a huge spiffy purple hat
image here
Her shoes will forever be a mystery! ...I'd like to believe that they're some type of flat walking shoes. I don't think she'd have too much heel on her shoes.

There's something I haven't been telling you )
atelierveola: (Kyaa! You saw my keywords!)
My personal reference so I can keep my portrayal of her character in line. Since you stumbled into this, I guess you could read it for fun or use it as a tl;dr version of a stalking post for her activity if you wanted to.

Warning: Will potentially get really really long

Please keep this a private matter between you and me. )


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