atelierveola: (smiling)

How's My Driving?



This is a crit post, where I beg for criticism so I can improve my performance. If you like this characterization, you'll like her to be better characterized, right? If you hate how I play her, you'll want to get rid of all the badness, right? I could do better! Please? And thanks, whether for providing very welcome crit or for reading through this rant and not punching me in the face or anything.

It's screened, anon enabled, and all the stuff for other to not see your comments and to deprive me of a way to track you to show my utmost thanks. For proof(and my testing purposes), you cannot see the obviously selfcest comment(it's labeled obviously selfcest) I made to myself.

Voicemail

Jul. 4th, 2030 10:42 pm
atelierveola: (You'll be seeing this one a lot)
I'm a little busy right now. I'll get back to you later.

[just point out if it's ic or ooc!]

Video 02

Aug. 25th, 2010 10:40 am
atelierveola: (You'll be seeing this one a lot)
To anyone that has gone to the castle's ruins, has anything been found? Clues on what Somarium is or how the castle was able to float, for example.

Dream 01

Jul. 14th, 2010 12:37 pm
atelierveola: (You'll be seeing this one a lot)
Dream Effect: Viewers can feel death around them. There's that feeling of excitement when you're on the brink of fulfilling a life long goal. The dream is completely silent, except for the chime and what she says near the end of it.

Maybe another time. )

[Veola wakes up and looks at the pendant she kept on her. Ever since she got this thing, she started thinking about that again. ...Was the crystal always this gray?]

Video 01

Jul. 5th, 2010 12:57 pm
atelierveola: (Kyaa! You saw my keywords!)
[Some buttons are pressed as Veola tries to figure out what this device in her pouch was. Somehow, she activated the video. She first looks at the screen strangely, wondering what it was doing. The slight constant shaking of the screen shows the nervousness she's been trying to keep to her self.]

"......"

[She soon figured it was pointless. It's not like she would talk to herself in the middle of nowhere, that would be silly. Her look soon turned to one of worry as she gave one last look at the device and looked around. The camera angle shifted along when she put the strange thing back in her pouch. From then on, the video just shows shifting movements in her pouch until it naturally timed out.]
atelierveola: (Default)
[Character Name] Veola
[Canon] Atelier Iris: Eternal Mana
[Point Taken from Canon] Endgame, after all her events

[Age] 16
[Gender] Female
[Sexual Orientation] Hetero

[Eye Color] violet
[Hair Color] brown
[Height] 5'1"
[Other] Nothing really. Most distinguishing feature is the hat
[Clothing]
She has a turtleneck dress, a simple shawl over it and a huge spiffy purple hat
image here
Her shoes will forever be a mystery! ...I'd like to believe that they're some type of flat walking shoes. I don't think she'd have too much heel on her shoes.

There's something I haven't been telling you )
atelierveola: (Default)
Hello.

Welcome. Pay no mind to the ones outside.

Oh, hello.

I'm a little busy. Could you make it quick?
atelierveola: (Kyaa! You saw my keywords!)
My personal reference so I can keep my portrayal of her character in line. Since you stumbled into this, I guess you could read it for fun or use it as a tl;dr version of a stalking post for her activity if you wanted to.

Warning: Will potentially get really really long

Please keep this a private matter between you and me. )

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